Thursday, February 2, 2012
WAR
once i was at home sleeping in my bed. All you heard was screaming and gun shots. I had woke up and somebody knocking on my door like it was a punching bag.I got up went to the door opened it and it was a chick.Her face was filled with tears just bollin her eyes out.she ran in i shut quick and peak out the window and saw nothing.i asked why was she crying so bad she looked shocked, she couldn't speak.she had pointed at the window and i saw soldiers run past the window.I slowly started making my way to the door. I slowly and carefully and i saw kamikaze's running around blowing people up,cars and even house's.I saw people getting shot .A Soldier spots me and i run to the attic and open it and put the beautiful women in there and told to stay until they leave. so i run out the door for a distraction.i loose the soldier and a freaking kamikaze starts to run after me so i get out of there and cut a few corners and have been running pretty long.so i start to sit down and rest and something caught my eye i was cornered and there was a soldier on side coming after me and the kamikaze's. I thought which way would i like to to die blow up and let my body parts fly every where or get shot and suffer. i pick the first choice.
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harsh Alex you would rather be blown up than shot that takes courage
ReplyDeleteWow. This was a really intense story you're telling, Alex. When I started reading it, I had no idea that it was fiction....I thought you were just telling a story from your life. That, your writing style, is what made it so powerful. There is value in telling a story simply, but this is tough to do right. You seem to have a pretty good handle on what not many writers are able to pull off. Cool stuff. Can't wait to see what you're going to publish next.
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